New dS story posted
Jan. 2nd, 2006 09:46 am![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png)
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Well, new to the web, anyway.
What if Fraser had met Ray Kowalski when he first came to Chicago?
First times, missing scene from the Pilot. Nominated for Huggy Award for Best Zine Story 2003. First published in Duet 2 from Duet Press, Slash, NC-17, 9,200 words, Written Fall 2001
Fire bad, tree pretty, feedback good.
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Date: 2006-01-02 04:43 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-01-02 04:52 pm (UTC)Happy New Year
~ Gina / Stormy
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Date: 2006-01-02 10:52 pm (UTC)I liked your version of Fraser--rather different that the interpretation you usually see in fic, but it still works, and I think fits well with the Fraser we see in the Pilot.
I loved the condoms. Again, it's a element you don't see much in fic--or at least not described in this much detail. I'm not one who believes that all fictional sex must be safe sex, but it's a refreshing change to see the issue addressed occasionally. Plus I think I learned a few things...
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Date: 2006-01-02 11:01 pm (UTC)I was in a condom store in the 80s and had to ask why they were selling dental damns. Hmmm. Research good.
Thanks for writing.
~ S.
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Date: 2006-01-03 04:05 am (UTC)J S
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Date: 2006-01-03 03:41 pm (UTC)Thanks for commenting.
~ Stormy
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Date: 2006-01-04 07:25 pm (UTC)As for Fraser and RayK both being into guys? You can make an excellent case for that; both of them exhibit behavior that isn't "normal" for two guys who are totally straight. Nobody here probably needs me to give examples. :)
J S
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Date: 2006-01-03 08:57 am (UTC)First I had big trouble believing that the Fraser you were describing was really our Fraser, but the more I read, the more it worked.
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Date: 2006-01-03 03:42 pm (UTC)I'm glad you liked the ending. It makes it all come together.
Thanks for commenting.
~ Stormy
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Date: 2006-01-08 04:54 am (UTC)It's such a different approach to Fraser than what I usually read, but just as good. I especially adore the ending;)
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Date: 2006-01-08 06:20 pm (UTC)Thank you kindly.
~ Stormy in Toronto!