New dS story posted

[stormheller.livejournal.com]

Well, new to the web, anyway.

First Person Imperfect

What if Fraser had met Ray Kowalski when he first came to Chicago?

First times, missing scene from the Pilot. Nominated for Huggy Award for Best Zine Story 2003. First published in Duet 2 from Duet Press, Slash, NC-17, 9,200 words, Written Fall 2001

Fire bad, tree pretty, feedback good.

 

Comments

[spainja.livejournal.com]

Oh, I liked that. A lot.

I liked your version of Fraser--rather different that the interpretation you usually see in fic, but it still works, and I think fits well with the Fraser we see in the Pilot.

I loved the condoms. Again, it's a element you don't see much in fic--or at least not described in this much detail. I'm not one who believes that all fictional sex must be safe sex, but it's a refreshing change to see the issue addressed occasionally. Plus I think I learned a few things...

[stormheller.livejournal.com]

Thanks for saying so. I wanted to see RayK interact with pre-Chicago Fraser. I wanted Fraser to think he was fitting in when he really didn't have a clue yet.
I was in a condom store in the 80s and had to ask why they were selling dental damns. Hmmm. Research good.
Thanks for writing.
~ S.