Selected Pages from Benton's Journal, by Moonloon.

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

I do too many of these image-heavy short-cut stories, but hey... fewer words means fewer typos, so we all win, right?

For those of you want complicated things like backstory, Ray just grabbed Fraser's journal, scribbled in it, and tossed it out the window. A few pages came loose and flew away. I caught them :)

Selected Pages from Benton's Journal

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Comments

[isiscolo.livejournal.com]

Hee, you are very silly! (And remarkably quick on the, er, draw.)

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

A little too quick. I suffer from premature delineation.

[bluebrocade.livejournal.com]

Awesome. I love jealous!Ray.

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

So does Fraser. Just not when he's run out of lube.

[malnpudl.livejournal.com]

*giggles*

Very clever. :-D

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

I have this addiction to Paint Shop Pro. It causes me to commit pic-fic on a regular basis.

[bibliokat.livejournal.com]

Oooo, I love possessiveness!

Great entries, very Fraser! What a way to find out about an allergy indeed!

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

Good thing he didn't drink it really. I hate to imagine what it would have doe to his insides.

[purpig21.livejournal.com]

Oh this was clever and fun and insightful, and left me wanting more! Thanks!

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

Whee!

I'm going to pretend that the typos are due to Fraser's spelling being almost as bad as mine.

[purpig21.livejournal.com]

*grins*
Well, I know it was due to your commitment to authenticity and feel the journal would have been less if not for the little typos and markouts.

Even Fraser makes mistakes in his own journal. *G*

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

Particularly when distracted by itchy tackle or friction butt-burns.

[llassah.livejournal.com]

Hee! Loved the timejumps, and Fraser's confiding, snarky tone. Lovely! And scarily quick!

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

I'm way too lazy to write the whole four months ;)

[beledibabe.livejournal.com]

Oh, FABULOUS!!!

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

Hee! Thank you :)

[scriggle.livejournal.com]

Wonderful!

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[akite.livejournal.com]

Hee! That was great!

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

Thanks, any excuse to play with Paint Shop Pro ;)

[bleedtoblue.livejournal.com]

I enjoyed that a great deal. Took the opportunity to read your other DS stories and enjoyed those as well. You catch the tone of F/RK very nicely. Thanks.

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

Wow, thank you! It's a very intimidating fandom to write in, everyone else is so good.

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

I cannot believe you created this fabulous piece so quickly and so brilliantly after the challenge announcement. You are indeed awesome. I bow to the East in admiration.

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

Aw, you're making me blush. When the bunny bites, it does so hard and fast and now now NOW! The stuff I think about first never works well.

[j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com]

Heeee!!! Very funny, and lots of fun!

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

Thank you :)

[mickeymvt.livejournal.com]

Oh man, that was brillantly funny. I love how Fraser can make the most insane things sound so normal. *G*

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

Yep, the man has a natural deadpan. My husband has the same talent, and it can be quite frustrating.

[burntcopper.livejournal.com]

:giggles:

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

:grins:

[ximeria.livejournal.com]

I just love how this fandom always comes up with new ways of doing things LOL. This was a work of art, and I almost spilled my coffee when I read the last page *g*

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

Thanks :) It's not really a new idea, I've done a few similar stories before, and some of the projects for the document challenge probably were my inspiration.

[gauriel.livejournal.com]

Oh, this was terrific! Thanks for sharing, I really enjoyed it and giggled all the way through.

I'm left wanting to read the rest of Benton's journal. ;)

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

Thank you :) I think Ray reads Fraser journal, and half the time it sends him to sleep and the other half he freaks out and yells 'OH MY GOD, YOU WROTE THAT DOWN?