New story

[omphale]

At least writing comment pr0n keeps us out of trouble. The kid still doesn't have a name--but Ray's got a favorite Disney movie.

Title: Sex and Cartoons
Authors: [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com] and [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com]
Pairing: F/K
Rating: NC-17
Length: 5400 words
Notes: More modified comment fic, this time without any real attempts at a plot. Original comment version is here.

Summary: Ray's not going to jump Fraser. Ray's going to see how long Fraser can hold out before jumping him.

Comments

[ruthless1.livejournal.com]

I liked this alot. But I think I used up all my complinetary words on the FIRST part of it - or perhaps in another comment in omphales's LJ. I still feel the same though - it's quite sweet and it clearly shows the quandry that most parents find themselves in IF they still have a sex drive left!

[omphale]

Thanks--both for the earlier comment, and for reading this new one even though it's (technically) kidfic.

The idea of Ray and Fraser becoming parents and then having no sex drive makes me very, very sad. I prefer to think of them this way (and I think I can say that [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com] agrees.)

[ruthless1.livejournal.com]

Well - Ray and Fraser not having sex is a nightmare scenario.
*spits to the side*
We shall never speak of this again!

[omphale]

Speak of what? I don't know what you're talking about. :D

[slidellra.livejournal.com]

Yup, what omphale said. (See what an awesome collaborator she is? Reads my mind. Brilliant girl.)

So incredibly pleased you liked it. Thanks!

Ggggguh!

[j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com]

You guys are really good together. Good separately, too. But, jeez, kidfic THAT hot? You rock! LOVE these guys, love the story. Still waiting to find out what they named the kidlet! Is it going to be a mystery forever? Nooooo!

The dancing hippos (Fraser's avoidance thereof) had me in stitches, as did the entire discussion of Dief and how he runs interference for them and the various boons he requires in return. Hilarious! And poor Ray! Sympathy for Ray and his erection! (The Rocking Chair Scene hits about a thousand degrees. Celsius. *whew*)

Write more! Your writing partnership is definitely clicking!

Re: Ggggguh!

[omphale]

Thank you! It's so much fun writing stuff with [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com] that I feel like any other reaction we get is icing on the (very porny) cake.

But, jeez, kidfic THAT hot? You rock!

See, you just give her a little tiny suggestion and off they go. It's a bit dizzying, really. But exciting.

Still waiting to find out what they named the kidlet! Is it going to be a mystery forever?

If that's at all possible, yes. (It isn't possible, but for right now it's entertaining to see if we can make it work without giving her a name--once it starts to take away from the rest of the story one of us will have to bite the bullet and pick something. I think we might call her Edgar. Or Norman.)

Sympathy for Ray and his erection!

Ray always seems to be the one left, um, hanging. I have no idea why that is. :-)

(The Rocking Chair Scene hits about a thousand degrees. Celsius. *whew*)

It does, right? She wrote about it and I was sure it wasn't going to work, but she pulled it off.

Write more! Your writing partnership is definitely clicking!

We can hardly ignore a request like that! (Plus, it's a blast working with slidellra, so as long as she's game, I'm happy to write more.)

Glad you enjoyed the story! (And yay! for happy readers!)

Re: Ggggguh!

[slidellra.livejournal.com]

See, you just give her a little tiny suggestion and off they go.

Wait, you mean one little tiny suggestion and they whip it out, right? That's what I thought.

While I fight down the full body blush at the kind words, must say the same if not more right back at you. This one was mostly (not all, let's say 68%, maybe 70%) you.

Re: Ggggguh!

[slidellra.livejournal.com]

This comment fic/co-writing thing is incredibly, ridiculously fun. And omphale23 is a gooooooood writer, so she makes it extra fun. Yeah, the rocking chair started out as me, but just about everything else you mentioned (and everything else brilliant in the fic) was all her. I'm a lucky girl.

(Norman sounds good to me. [See? Co-writing at its finest.])

Thanks so much for the lovely, make-us-feel-good comment!

Re: Ggggguh!

[j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com]

Yeah, the rocking chair started out as me, but just about everything else you mentioned (and everything else brilliant in the fic) was all her. I'm a lucky girl.

Hey, don't go overboard with the modesty, there. You posted your work-in-progress, so we can all clearly see the brilliant parts that are yours. As well as those that are omphale's. You both rock.

*whispers* Learn how to take a compliment, okay? The correct response is simply: "Thank you." :) :)

Re: Ggggguh!

[slidellra.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

[mickeymvt.livejournal.com]

Kid!fic should not be this hot. It seems so wrong. *g*

I agree, the rocking chair bit was a scorcher. And I love Deif the enabler AND blackmailer. So him. HEE

Keep up the good work ladies!!

PS- Will be friending both of you. :)

[omphale]

Thanks! It seems wrong, the whole sex and kidfic thing, and yet we can't seem to resist (a classic definition of addiction, really.)

So glad you liked it--and friend away. Friends are always good. :)