Hallo and new fic

[lucifercircle.livejournal.com]

Hi, my name is Luciferofthecircle and I've been reading Due South fic for a while now but I've only just got around to joining LJ. I have written one fic - HTML address below but I'm not sure if it's linked because I have no idea how this thing works. All feedback appreciated as I am no good at objectively judging what I've written. More will follow if I ever manage to get my act together.

http://www.squidge.org/dsa/archive/17/sexand.html

Comments

[akite.livejournal.com]

The link works just fine. I saw a couple of things that bare comment. First, double quotation marks for dialog is the norm. Example: "I love you, Ben." The only other thing I saw was Ray started for the draws. I'm guessing that should be drawers, as in the drawers in Fraser's desk? Other than that, yeah, buddy, it was hot. *g*