The link works just fine. I saw a couple of things that bare comment. First, double quotation marks for dialog is the norm. Example: "I love you, Ben." The only other thing I saw was Ray started for the draws. I'm guessing that should be drawers, as in the drawers in Fraser's desk? Other than that, yeah, buddy, it was hot. *g*
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Date: 2006-01-28 01:08 am (UTC)