New fic: Crazy

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This was written for the song!fic challenge on ds_flashfiction, but I missed the deadline. D'oh!

Crazy
F/K, PG fluff, 18K

“I’m afraid I have a—a confession to make.”


Thanks to sprat, who betaed this with her usual brilliance. I am, as ever, enormously grateful. Her southern hemisphere shrine is under construction. Thanks also to Miriam and secret_garden for input at various stages.

Notes and lyrics are on my lj.

Comments

[evilprettykitty.livejournal.com]

Link doesn't work....sad face!

[china_shop]

Double d'oh! Sorry. Fixed now. (Thanks.)

[evilprettykitty.livejournal.com]

So good!

“If you were crazy, Dief would tell me.”

I laughed so hard at that.

[china_shop]

*g* Thanks! Glad you liked. :)

[raveninthewind.livejournal.com]

Ha! at the ending.

I love your freaky Fraser and tolerant Ray.

[china_shop]

Thanks so much! *beam*

[lorem_ipsum]

> “I’m afraid I have a—a confession to make.”
> “Yeah?” Christ, he was going to say it. Ray’s pulse picked up, clanging like an alarm bell, so he nearly didn’t hear Fraser’s next words.

Aw, poor Ray, getting all excited over nothing. (also: *snerk*)

> Okay.” Fraser was crazy, really certifiable. It didn’t seem right to speculate on whether that meant he was more or less likely to want to have sex with Ray, so Ray pushed that thought aside.

*giggle*

> Ray let his hand drift sideways, meaning to pat Fraser’s arm, but somehow finding Fraser’s hand instead.

Ray's so cute!

> “Jeez, if my old man was hanging around being dead at me all the time, I’d go crazy.”

LOL

> “Well, Ray, you and I agreed—quite early on, in fact—not to act on our mutual attraction as long as you were undercover as my partner. I admit I was somewhat dismayed when your actions indicated this restraint was necessary, but you made it very clear that you couldn’t otherwise carry out your role as Ray Vecchio convincingly.” Fraser smiled brilliantly. “Have I mentioned how glad I am you changed your mind?”

Ha. That's *so* Fraser.

:)

[china_shop]

*g* I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks. :)

[norah.livejournal.com]

That was nice. Thank you. I needed a sweet kissing story today.

[china_shop]

You're very welcome. Glad to have been of service. :) :)

(Thanks!)

[sockich.livejournal.com]

Oh, very nice.

“Well, Ray, you and I agreed—quite early on, in fact—not to act on our mutual attraction as long as you were undercover as my partner. I admit I was somewhat dismayed when your actions indicated this restraint was necessary, but you made it very clear that you couldn’t otherwise carry out your role as Ray Vecchio convincingly.” Fraser smiled brilliantly. “Have I mentioned how glad I am you changed your mind?”

*loves*

[china_shop]

Thanks! *beam*

[nerdwegian.livejournal.com]

Oh, that was so amazingly fantastic! :D I loved every little bit of it, from Fraser's dad, to not saying what Ray thinks he's gonna say, to the piano, to “So, uh, you gonna kiss me now?” -- the last of which is my favorite part of the whole damn thing, because it suits the mood and the setting so perfectly, and I can completely hear Ray say it in my head! :D

[china_shop]

Yay, thank you so much! *beam*

[brooklinegirl.livejournal.com]

wonderful, oh, perfection - I love this, I love YOU, for thinking of this, for HAVING this, there are too few stories where Fraser admits this to Ray, the fear for his sanity, and god, just, the way you balance that with Ray wanting, so badly, is just totally wonderful. LOVELY.

[china_shop]

Yay, THANK YOU!!! *beam*

[bluebrocade.livejournal.com]

love it. my favorite part:

Ray caught his hand and held it. “Stop distracting me, Fraser. What was this agreement? What exactly did I agree to? Tell me.”

“Well, Ray, you and I agreed—quite early on, in fact—not to act on our mutual attraction as long as you were undercover as my partner. I admit I was somewhat dismayed when your actions indicated this restraint was necessary, but you made it very clear that you couldn’t otherwise carry out your role as Ray Vecchio convincingly.” Fraser smiled brilliantly. “Have I mentioned how glad I am you changed your mind?”

Ray huffed out a breath, and stared and stared at him, but couldn’t get angry, not while their bodies were tangled together like this, warm and lazy and worn out. “You’re delusional, you know that?” he managed at last.

“Yes, Ray,” Fraser said, nodding, still smiling at him. “Yes, I know.”

[china_shop]

Thanks so much! *beam*

[lilac-one.livejournal.com]

I. Adore. This.

A lot.

[china_shop]

Yay! Thank you. *beam*