New story: Rush

[china_shop]

This started as a series of snippets in my LJ:

Rush, F/K, PG-13, 17k

Summary: He can’t keep away from that little patch of skin. Has to touch it. It’s like a new tattoo, like graffiti: Fraser was here.

Many thanks to the wonderful mergatrude for beta. :)

Comments

[aoudafogg.livejournal.com]

oh, this was really quite terrific *wg* I really liked the structure, and both of their voices were so clear! Ray's ponderings were so vivid in the first part -- and I could SO see them dancing around each other in the 3rd part. Lovely cozy, hot, loving story. Thanks.

[bonspiel.livejournal.com]

Very very nice. I liked your Ray voice a lot.

Fraser tries to disguise his neediness with warmth, but he can tell that even in this dark room, Ray can see right through him. Perhaps it should be unnerving, but Fraser is elated by it. To be understood like this is a rare gift.

Aww. *hugs needy Fraser* In the end, it all comes down to the partnership/duet, doesn't it?

[china_shop]

Yes, exactly. *loves the partnership*

Glad you liked it. Thanks! :)

[china_shop]

Thank you! *beam*

[askye.livejournal.com]

oh! that's yummy!

[china_shop]

Thanks! :)