New Fic by mondschein1

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Hello dS people! I'm a new writer, and I thought I'd post my first fic to the noticeboard so that somebody would actually find it. It's long, for those of you who like that sort of thing -- here's a vague description:

Title: Nevermore: A Series of Abnormal Circumstances
Author: mondschein1
Category: Pre-slash
Pairing: If there is one, it's F/K, but...only if you must have a pairing.
Warnings: h/c, death story(one that upsets some people more than others. You will know before anything very upsetting happens), general angst. Lots of it, because. Death story. C'mon.
Rating: Mmm...R. For language, and general disturbingness. Just to be on the safe side. No sex. NO SMUT. I cannot write smut for my life, I don't think.

First part of "Nevermore:..."
Second part of "Nevermore:..."

Constructive criticism welcomed!

Comments

[gammi-demon.livejournal.com]

I...I don't think there's anything TO criticise. I'm horribly sad now. Excuse me while I cry.


....It's well written and thought out and _realistic_ which is always good. I mean, I would love it if there was some sort of miricle that saved him but really... the story would have lost it's flavor.

Good job.

[mondschein1.livejournal.com]

I am sorry for making you sad! It made me sad as well. I had this massive writing binge that lasted three days and random people kept asking me what was up. Because I love RayK. But we must torment those characters we love.

But thanks -- I am glad you liked, despite the lack of miracle. Yay angst in death fic!