I just read your three-part story... and now this! Gee, you're good! I really liked how you portrayed Ray in this - mellow but still very much himself. And Stella... You've made me feel for her, despite a strong urge to kick her in the head. I'm actually having a china_shop lovefest moment over here!!
Wonderful. Great Stella characterization- I think my favorite of her lines was this, for some inexplicable reason:
He cleared his throat (a nervous trait she would have to rid him of if he ever took the stand, she noted automatically).
It's just an awesome detail. Oh, and I loved the bit where Fraser did the smirky thing into his drink. Heck, I loved all of it. *joins in on the lovefest*
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Date: 2004-12-22 05:49 am (UTC)I'm actually having a china_shop lovefest moment over here!!
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Date: 2004-12-22 11:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-12-22 06:56 am (UTC)He cleared his throat (a nervous trait she would have to rid him of if he ever took the stand, she noted automatically).
It's just an awesome detail. Oh, and I loved the bit where Fraser did the smirky thing into his drink. Heck, I loved all of it. *joins in on the lovefest*
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