New story, sorta

[china_shop]

So, okay. First there was a flashfiction, Favor (Naked Without Sex challenge). Then there was a flashfiction sequel Would you make a jump like that if you didn't have to? (Challenge challenge).

Now there's a smutty coda, Falling is Like This (F/K, NC-17, 10k).

Many many many thanks to serialkarma for wonderfully betaing all of these, and being incredibly patient with me as I wibbled. You are fantabulous! :)

Comments

[pearl-o.livejournal.com]

Aww, yay.

[farwing.livejournal.com]

That's pretty much my response too. :)

[china_shop]

*beam*

[china_shop]

*beam*

[claire.livejournal.com]

Beautiful. And also hot. I love the detail about Ray holding onto the table.

[china_shop]

Thank you so much. :)

[serialkarma.livejournal.com]

Ah ha! The title is from an Ani song! I meant to ask you and then forgot, but it's been bugging me because I knew I recognized that line from somewhere.

And hey, my pleasure. Seriously.*g*

[china_shop]

The title is from an Ani song!

"We can't fight gravity on a planet that insists that love is like falling, and falling is like this..." Yep. :)

[maryavatar.livejournal.com]

Oooh, very nice. I hadn't read any of these, so getting the whole thing at once was a real treat.

[china_shop]

Thank you so much. *beam*

[tobyfan.livejournal.com]

Ray gives up on the table as anchor, shoves it away so it sways and topples with a crash, and grabs Fraser, and hangs on. “Oh! Oh, god. Fraser!” he gasps and tenses like a bowstring, and comes hot and hard between them.

*thud*

That is one delicious image. I read all three of the stories. Thanks for linking to them all. This is just deliciously ripe with so much sexual tension, *I* was vibrating with it. I can only imagine who Ray and Fraser were feeling. Guh!

Beautifully written. All three.

[china_shop]

Thank you very kindly. *beam*

[engenda.livejournal.com]

He’s distracted from this train of thought when Ray lets go of Fraser’s shoulders and stretches up to grab a nearby table leg for leverage. Ray braces his heels on the floorboards and thrusts into Fraser’s fist. The movement pulls Ray’s stomach deliciously tight, and Fraser abandons any plans to taste Ray further. He needs to hold him. He needs to see his face as he comes.

This image here *points* this just sent my brain into overheat.

*flails about*

And I have so much work to do!

This is just wonderful

[china_shop]

Yay! Thank you! :)

[celli]

Oh, wow. Each one is great, but all three together are exponentially great. :)

[china_shop]

Thanks! :)

[silverakira.livejournal.com]

Ohmigod. Ohmigod, I love you so, so much for writing this, not in the least of which because I was just, you know, listening to this song the other day, and then all of a sudden it just hit me that this was Fraser and this was Ray and this was them together, and I wanted a story to be written so badly about them having sex, falling in love, whatever to this song.

And I'm sitting here and squeeing a little and jumping up and down a little, but mostly loving you.

(As a side note, the whole table thing killed me, so I am now going to go back and reread it and listen to Ani DiFranco, and maybe die from happiness.)

[china_shop]

Yay! Synchronicity! *beam* Isn't it a gorgeous song?

[mergatrude.livejournal.com]

*thud*

really wonderful, all three of them, each building upon the other to a glorious climax ... (okay, sorry about that)

and so full of wonderful moments and images like Fraser watches him possessively. Sees his eyes scrunch tight, and a frown—of concentration, or pleasure too exquisite to stand, perhaps—line his forehead, where his hair is damp with sweat.

[china_shop]

So glad you liked them. *beam*

[nigeltde]

I is dead with guh.

*guh*

Thanks!

[china_shop]

Glad you liked it. Thanks. :)

[estrella30.livejournal.com]

All three of these were fantastic on their own, but being able to read them all together at once? Fucking priceless.

Thanks for posting!

[china_shop]

Yay! So glad you liked them! Thank you! :)

[plotbunniofdoom]

That was great. So great.

*happy sigh*

[china_shop]

Thanks! \o/

[azamiko.livejournal.com]

Haha, you kept it out of the bedroom! Love Ray's valid point of 'why not?'

[china_shop]

Thanks! :-D