Oh, wow. This was so many different shades of excellent. And I don't even like baby stories.
I skimmed over the sex scenes, because porn really bores me these days (though I'd wager I'm the only one), but everything else just killed me in the best way. If that makes any sense. So, yes. Impressive.
This was a really lovely, touching story. I loved the moment in the hospital when Ray first held his son. Sigh!
You are such a nice fic-author! you gave two of your fictional characters the child they always wanted (& they got to have him together! it's lovely how you kept them friends & loving & understanding each other) and two of your other characters the boyfriend they wanted. Too bad Frannie didn't get a boyfriend as well. Maybe in the sequel?
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Date: 2004-12-13 08:27 pm (UTC)I skimmed over the sex scenes, because porn really bores me these days (though I'd wager I'm the only one), but everything else just killed me in the best way. If that makes any sense. So, yes. Impressive.
- Brandi
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Date: 2004-12-15 11:37 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-12-13 09:38 pm (UTC)You made me like kidfic! I'm not sure if I should thank you, congratulate you, or run screaming from the room.
Lovely story :)
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Date: 2004-12-15 11:52 pm (UTC)Thanks. ;)
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Date: 2004-12-14 12:05 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-12-15 11:53 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2004-12-15 11:54 pm (UTC)Really lovely
Date: 2004-12-16 02:24 am (UTC)You are such a nice fic-author! you gave two of your fictional characters the child they always wanted (& they got to have him together! it's lovely how you kept them friends & loving & understanding each other) and two of your other characters the boyfriend they wanted. Too bad Frannie didn't get a boyfriend as well. Maybe in the sequel?
Yeah! how about a sequel!? Please, huh, please!
cheers!
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Re: Really lovely
Date: 2004-12-16 02:38 am (UTC)A sequel is possible - after all, in canon Frannie has six kids - but not upcoming any time soon.