FIC: Taking out the Trash 4

[xtricks.livejournal.com]

Next installment.

For some reason the elipses (...) didn't show up in the story therefore, sorry about the weird formatting.

http://www.squidge.org/dsa/archive/12/takingout4.html

Comments

Elipses

[themoo37.livejournal.com]

here's the trick of making the three dots show as 3 dots

put spaces between each.

period space period space period.

For reasons I don't understand the net tends to eat up a normal elipse.

Re: Elipses

[xtricks.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I'll give it a try.

[djinanna.livejournal.com]

I'm really enjoying your story. Great suspense, interesting original character, and a nice use of canon backstory to expand into your own. I also like how you're tying together the Canadian and Chicago connections. And while Josh actually finding Ray in Canada felt like a longshot when he started out, you made it believable. Plus, I always love to see new perspectives on the canon characters through the eyes of someone who's just meeting them.

Well done! I'm looking forward to more ...

(I'm also reading and enjoying Long Journey Home. But OMG poor Fraser! Poor Ray! Poor everybody! Ow!!!)

[xtricks.livejournal.com]

Thank you, thank you! Glad it's working.

And, yes, I'm still plugging along on LJH--it's just slower than the other.