FIC: Taking out the Trash 2/?

[xtricks.livejournal.com]

Here's the next bit. I'm doing a bad thing; I discovered I can't do first person POV for all the characters in the story so...only Josh is in first person, everyone else is not. I know that's not kosher but the story remains clearly readable.

"Vecchio!" Welsh bellowed leaning in his doorway and rattling everybody's brains with the volume. Ray Vecchio groaned; the shit was rolling downhill and there he was at the bottom. Shoving his chair back, he walked into the Lieu's office and took his place.

"Yeah?" he asked.

"The Spanetti case?"

"I just *got* it Lieu!"

"Yes, you got it and you better get it." Welsh looked like he'd swallowed a bad pickle. "The mayor's mother-in-law lives next door to the Spanetti's and the mayor wants the case closed so mommy dearest can sleep at night. And we, as fine protectors of the citizenry of Chicago, are here to make that possible."


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Comments

[tyk.livejournal.com]

i hope you keep going -- it's an interesting way to mix up Vecchio back on the force with Ray and Fraser in Canada... I can see both Ray and Fraser connecting with the boy.

[(Anonymous)]

Oooh, I like this. More please?

btw, I love your icon - the first time I took a look I saw a whales tail but now I see a silhouetted angel... gotta love those two-in-one deals