Your retelling of this oft-told tale is very well done. I love your characterizations: spot-on. I recognize the images of Inuvik. And I love the development of the story.
I especially liked that Ray got it together enough to talk to Fraser before he left. Thank you! Communication, baby!
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Date: 2006-10-25 02:02 am (UTC)I especially liked that Ray got it together enough to talk to Fraser before he left. Thank you! Communication, baby!