Date: 2006-09-26 03:37 am (UTC)
I like the idea of starting at the beginning, giving the different povs. A couple of things that bothered me though. I don't think Ray would think of himself as Stanley Kowalski and two, the whole dialect thing kind of takes me out of the story. Still, it's a nice to think that Ray's edgy and wondering how he's going to fit in with the Mountie.
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