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ds_noticeboardIf you don't mind, I'd like some feedback on an extended piece I've been working on; characterization, plotting, pacing, dialogue, canon gaffes, basically everything.
Pairing: Kowalski/Fraser
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter
Word count: 8,182
Geometry, Chapter 1
I'd appreciate any commentary anyone feels like leaving.
Pairing: Kowalski/Fraser
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter
Word count: 8,182
Geometry, Chapter 1
I'd appreciate any commentary anyone feels like leaving.
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