Little Bit Drunk, Whole Lot Sad

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I just wrote a story in response to flashfic's 'cliché' challenge, and I thought other dS fans might want to read it... Here's the LINK... it started off on the fairly cheerful AU idea that Frannie gets her man... but turned into something really dark.

I'm afraid the draft isn't perfect. I tried editing it for paragraphing after I posted it, and it messed things up big style, so if it's rough around the edges, forgive me. Hope you enjoy it though. This story's stuck in my head now, and I'd be grateful for any feedback. (Warnings for explicit sex.)