mamaffy.livejournal.comI have this story that could use a final read-through (F/K, NC 17, 5644 words).
Fraser and Kowalski have an argument and it gets physically violent. I think/hope it's in character but you should be open to that idea. There is also quite some porn. It's not terribly dark, though, it's even a little fluffy at times.
It's already beta-ed and in a pretty good shape. So I hope it isn't too much work. I'd just like a native speaker to check for commas-annoyances and to make sure that my revisions read smoothly.
That doesn't mean you couldn't comment on the content or offer suggestions, I'd be glad. But I'd like a read-through as well.
Pretty please? :)
Thanks!
P.S. I can upload it somewhere or email it, whatever works best for you.