In the Closet: (remix of 'Ray's Enemy') for love-jackianto

[bghost.livejournal.com]

Inspired by the following series, The Enemy, here is a little gift!fic tolove_jackianto, the funniest woman in dS or any other show business. Hope it at least raises a chuckle, given how many times you've made me laugh till my belly hurt.

Title: In the Closet
Characters: Fraser, RayK, OC
Rating: G
Fandom: due South
Word Count: 634
Summary: Ray's hiding something, and it's in the closet...

Read 'In the Closet' Here

Comments

[vickitub.livejournal.com]

Hilarious that was so funny i swear lol lol

[ride-4ever.livejournal.com]

FTW! This is the most amazing mix of hilarity and yet serious undertones...and an absolutely brill blending of canon aspects with...uh...how good H.P. Lovecraft would be if he actually were good something Lovecraftian.

Fraser took the suggestion literally, and started to count down. Totes Fraser.

The body language! The dialogue! Fraser's understandable nonchalance about what outré things might lie beyond the closet door (and <3 “I was expecting snow")! Folie a deux!

<3 how with Fraser there's always another story, there's always another "Did I ever tell you about the time..." and how you make that open-ended line the concluding line of the fic.

[sage]

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