Argh, I wish I could edit my replies, so I didn't litter up this thread... just to say, I'm going to pluck out the "everything I thought I'd lost" stanza completely, and what do you think of "Ragged Heart Road" as a title? Referencing "Ragged Ass Road" from musical canon? (It's the song being played when the Inuit are retrieving their masks.)
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Date: 2012-03-13 01:05 am (UTC)