New dS story posted

[stormheller.livejournal.com]

Well, new to the web, anyway.

First Person Imperfect

What if Fraser had met Ray Kowalski when he first came to Chicago?

First times, missing scene from the Pilot. Nominated for Huggy Award for Best Zine Story 2003. First published in Duet 2 from Duet Press, Slash, NC-17, 9,200 words, Written Fall 2001

Fire bad, tree pretty, feedback good.

 

Comments

[axiom_of_stripe]

yay! i still love this story tremendously!

[spainja.livejournal.com]

Oh, I liked that. A lot.

I liked your version of Fraser--rather different that the interpretation you usually see in fic, but it still works, and I think fits well with the Fraser we see in the Pilot.

I loved the condoms. Again, it's a element you don't see much in fic--or at least not described in this much detail. I'm not one who believes that all fictional sex must be safe sex, but it's a refreshing change to see the issue addressed occasionally. Plus I think I learned a few things...

[j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com]

Thanks for putting this online. I really enjoyed it. It's hot, your Ray is wonderful, and the Fraser interpretation is refreshingly different. And it's certainly a justifiable interpretation. I love how Ray's prediction about how they'll meet again comes true. :)

J S

[missapocalyptic.livejournal.com]

I agree with j_s_cavalcante, the ending is wondeful.

First I had big trouble believing that the Fraser you were describing was really our Fraser, but the more I read, the more it worked.

[bibliokat.livejournal.com]

Wow. I'm so glad you put this online.

It's such a different approach to Fraser than what I usually read, but just as good. I especially adore the ending;)