New Fic

[denile11.livejournal.com]

Title: Backwards
Author: DeNile
Pairing: Fraser/RayK
Rating: NC-17
Notes: This is the promised cookie for Sam80853. Beta'd by Berty and LuciferoftheCircle.

http://www.squidge.org/dsa/archive/19/backwards.html

Comments

[missapocalyptic.livejournal.com]

This is bloody brilliant! I don't know which is hotter - the hot and desperate sex in the dark thing or the warm and cozy teasing in the bed thing. Love both.

[denile11.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much. I worked through a concussion to get it posted, so I'm glad you liked it.

[redhedlvr.livejournal.com]

This was great. Short, sweet and hot. I liked Ray's little outing with Dief, too.

And, I have to say, use the commas! I find when I read, I automatically put them in where I think they should go anyway. How weird is that?

[denile11.livejournal.com]

Ah, thank you. Personally, I love commas and I appreciate the comma support. Although, in my beta readers' defence, I do use them A LOT.

[sam80853.livejournal.com]

Yummy cookie, thank you ::grins::

Hot and kinda cute with sneakyFraser showing up at night and having his way with Ray.

Ray's conversation with Dief is just brilliant! The ear thingy ... ::giggles::.