New DS story - F/V

[joandarck.livejournal.com]

It's a (with-permission) remix (so not really new, per se) of china_shop's What It Is, which is set after The Blue Line.

Pairing: Fraser/Vecchio
Length: 1500 words
Rating: G
Stupid Questions

Comments

[ruthless1.livejournal.com]

I liked this. I am not sure why you aren't feeling confident about it because I think you did a great job. Your characterization of Ray was great - I can see him taking off actually instead of falling right into it. He's not always as impulsive as some of the stories make him out to be. Hello? He lives with his mother - this is not necessarily a guy that will jump into Fraser's bed immediately. Good job.

[joandarck.livejournal.com]

Oh - you're too kind! Thank you!