ext_12485 ([identity profile] lucifercircle.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_noticeboard2006-01-28 12:28 am
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Hallo and new fic

Hi, my name is Luciferofthecircle and I've been reading Due South fic for a while now but I've only just got around to joining LJ. I have written one fic - HTML address below but I'm not sure if it's linked because I have no idea how this thing works. All feedback appreciated as I am no good at objectively judging what I've written. More will follow if I ever manage to get my act together.

http://www.squidge.org/dsa/archive/17/sexand.html
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[identity profile] akite.livejournal.com 2006-01-28 01:08 am (UTC)(link)
The link works just fine. I saw a couple of things that bare comment. First, double quotation marks for dialog is the norm. Example: "I love you, Ben." The only other thing I saw was Ray started for the draws. I'm guessing that should be drawers, as in the drawers in Fraser's desk? Other than that, yeah, buddy, it was hot. *g*

[identity profile] lucifercircle.livejournal.com 2006-01-29 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. I knew 'draws' looked wrong but I couldn't work out the right spelling. Glad you liked it.
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