Stuck writing... any feedback?

[bghost.livejournal.com]

So, I'm writing a giftfic (that I originally intended to be quite short) which is currently standing at two and a half thousand words, and about half finished.

Normally I would ask ride_4ever for help, but she's doing the last minute work on the BB draft, to be posted later tonight.

The story I'm working on explores Fraser's relationship to the Great Lakes, including specifically 'the Lake they call Michigan.' It starts during Pizzas and Promises, with him finding Ray(V) drowned in the boot of the car, and the promise he has to make to the 'Lady of the Lake' to win back his life. So far I'm halfway through Mountie on the Bounty, and I have a question about narrative point of view (and also, what the heck have I got into here?) If there is anyone out there who likes a bit of creepiness with their dS and wants to give me some feedback, I'd be grateful.

Thank you kindly!

Comments

[desireearmfeldt]

I'd be happy to take a look.

[bghost.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Do you still have my email address? My brain has gone blank, and I can't remember your IRL name. But help would be greatly appreciated.

Are you happy to look at something in gdocs, just out of interest? I find it a really interactive way to get feedback and respond to it. If you're happy to use that platform, I'll send you a link.

[desireearmfeldt]

Sent you an email.

[bghost.livejournal.com]

TYK!

[seabroth.livejournal.com]

I can also R&R!! I like dark stuff.

(Who's the lady of the lake? RayK? lol!)

[bghost.livejournal.com]

Alas, no - now that would be a completely different fic. Hmmmm... plot bunnies a hopping.

[csad21.livejournal.com]

You can count me in as well. I'd be happy to help. :)

[bghost.livejournal.com]

thank you kindly!