new DS fic

[zelempa.livejournal.com]

Title: Upon Close Inspection
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: PG... or possibly G. There's swearing, that's it.
Word Count: ~12000
A/N: For Lucifuge 5, for Help Chile. Prompt: post-COTW curtain!fic.

"Can we try to be normal?" said Ray. "Just for a day. For like, two hours. I'll be Ray, and you'll be Ben, and that'll be Dief, our dog."

From the doorway, Diefenbaker whined.

Ray pointed at him. "You, suck it up. Take one for the team."

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Comments

[dwelian.livejournal.com]

Love this! Very believable, and you had Ray and Fraser's modes of speech down perfectly!

[zelempa.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I don't know if it comes across, but the formal, Frasery way is totally the way I naturally write, and then I have to go through and casual it up for Ray. It's, uh, a lot less work in a Fraser POV story. :)

I'm glad you liked it!