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luzula ([personal profile] luzula) wrote in [community profile] ds_noticeboard2009-03-20 11:14 am

New story: "I first came to Chicago on the trail of the killers of my husband", by Luzula

Title: I first came to Chicago on the trail of the killers of my husband
Author: [livejournal.com profile] luzula
Pairings: Maggie/Frannie with a side of Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: PG-13
Length: 9,300 words
Summary: Maggie returns to Chicago to visit her brother, and gets involved in a case.
Notes: This story is set between Hunting Season and CotW. I'm very grateful to my betas [livejournal.com profile] isiscolo, [livejournal.com profile] akamine_chan and [livejournal.com profile] primroseburrows for all their help!

I first came to Chicago on the trail of the killers of my husband

[identity profile] bonzaineko.livejournal.com 2009-03-20 04:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I enjoyed that story. Thanks for posting! Maggie seems to be a rather underused character both in the show and in fandom, so it's always nice to see what happened after the family tree was revealed and all that.

One editorial note: Maggie makes mention of wearing civvies for her visit (since she was on leave and all that), but in the airport when you had Benton hugging her, there was a line about Stetsons colliding, which implies she was in full (dress) uniform. I don't know if this is at all helpful, but thought I'd point it out.

Again, thanks for posting!