ext_28362 ([identity profile] tallykat668.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_noticeboard2006-05-25 05:39 pm
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dS fic: Can I get some input from you folks?

If you don't mind, I'd like some feedback on an extended piece I've been working on; characterization, plotting, pacing, dialogue, canon gaffes, basically everything.

Pairing: Kowalski/Fraser
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter
Word count: 8,182

Geometry, Chapter 1

I'd appreciate any commentary anyone feels like leaving.